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best roleplay so far?
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PostSubject: Sangheili - story feedback   Tue May 18, 2010 3:03 am

im the most active person. wierd.

anyways, feedback thread for roleplay stories as made by...ummm....oh yeah, me.

Rema_'Pesas - Trader

no stories yet added.

Etien_Fitzroy - Gallic Brigand

http://www.aofgaming.org/roleplay-stories-logs-f16/etien_fitzroy-t1416.htm

Funeste_Présage - Gunboat

http://www.aofgaming.org/roleplay-stories-logs-f16/gb-gunboat-funeste-presage-t1413.htm

Exodus - Research Vessel

http://www.aofgaming.org/roleplay-stories-logs-f16/intercepted-transmission-t1404.htm

http://www.aofgaming.org/roleplay-stories-logs-f16/exodus-logs-t1414.htm

Mack_Canon - Scientist (offshoot of Exodus)

http://www.aofgaming.org/roleplay-stories-logs-f16/mack_canon-t1417.htm

NOTE:above stories may not be in chronological order. to place them in chronological order, become me. or look below.

come on, tell me. am i better than comfort or what? (yes, i am goading you.)

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PostSubject: Re: Sangheili - story feedback   Tue May 18, 2010 3:58 am

You goading bastard! I do have to concede, you are far better at serious stuff than I am. Then again, you're about as funny as the bear cavalry. And trust me... you don't want to laugh at them. Good stuff, in other words. Especially the Exodus - I just love a thriller Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Sangheili - story feedback   Tue May 18, 2010 4:11 am

Exodus i had a plan for, but i had no idea it would go this fast. i thought it might take a while to get a nomad, and now im gonna split exodus into two things!!!(you'll have to wait though)

also, anyone who bumps into Sion, give him cardamine. hes so lovable!(really, he hugged my ship. i think)

back serious, OMG COMPLIMENT FROM COMFORT WRITING JESUS LOL HUG

obivously not serious enough. thanks man Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Sangheili - story feedback   Tue May 18, 2010 4:16 am

Sangheili wrote:
back serious, OMG COMPLIMENT FROM COMFORT WRITING JESUS LOL HUG

*cue man love moments theme* Link
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PostSubject: Re: Sangheili - story feedback   Tue May 18, 2010 4:21 am

I will give them 9/10.

You can club some of topics together though.There could be some continuity. Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Sangheili - story feedback   Tue May 18, 2010 4:23 am

but......eeeffffoooorrrt.

maybe later. but i like each one to be separate, y'know, different sources on each one.

i s'pose your way is less cluttered......

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PostSubject: Re: Sangheili - story feedback   Wed May 19, 2010 10:32 am

ok, who voted the fifth option? bastard. Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Sangheili - story feedback   Thu May 20, 2010 2:23 pm

*points at sinix* Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Sangheili - story feedback   Thu May 20, 2010 2:32 pm

cugix, may i request permission to kill your significant other?

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PostSubject: Re: Sangheili - story feedback   Fri May 21, 2010 3:49 am

OORP-
That is one of the most famous poems of all time. Robert Frost's Road Not Taken. Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Sangheili - story feedback   Fri May 21, 2010 12:02 pm

Geromix, theres a feedback thread for a reason. i already had to delete one of cugix's posts, since i can't remember how to move them.

and it fits. Mack could have stayed at the shrine, and become infested(a.k.a i make a nomad baby character)or come home. he came home, as not many do.

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PostSubject: Re: Sangheili - story feedback   Sat May 22, 2010 3:48 am

@Sang- Sorry,I have split and merged the replies to this thread.

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PostSubject: Re: Sangheili - story feedback   Sat May 22, 2010 1:16 pm

thanks. *hug*

mwahahahahah, im in a good mood today.

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PostSubject: Re: Sangheili - story feedback   Mon May 24, 2010 3:16 am

Sangheili wrote:
cugix, may i request permission to kill your significant other?

What?

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PostSubject: Re: Sangheili - story feedback   Mon May 24, 2010 12:23 pm

heehee.......

yeah, ignore that. i was loopy at the time.

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PostSubject: Re: Sangheili - story feedback   Wed Jun 09, 2010 12:56 pm

wasn't etiene imprissoned?

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PostSubject: Re: Sangheili - story feedback   Fri Jun 11, 2010 11:17 am

that last bit was long after he bumped into the brigands.

its ocnfusing without a timing system. im gonna work on that....eventually.

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PostSubject: Re: Sangheili - story feedback   Sat Jun 12, 2010 9:40 am

ok -.-

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PostSubject: Re: Sangheili - story feedback   Fri Jun 25, 2010 8:06 pm

re: Etien Fitzroy: You're can't use "Yeeeeah" unless you mke an epic pun beforehand. Learn your damn memes.
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PostSubject: Re: Sangheili - story feedback   Sat Jun 26, 2010 5:37 am

o_0

theres a meme for yeeeeeeah?

wierd.

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PostSubject: Re: Sangheili - story feedback   Sat Jun 26, 2010 6:51 am

Sangheili wrote:
o_0

theres a meme for yeeeeeeah?

wierd.

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Just keep reading back through the archives of this site: http://comixed.com/
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PostSubject: Re: Sangheili - story feedback   Sat Jun 26, 2010 9:32 am

oh, wait, yeah, the CSI thingy.

it was not in that context. at all. thats a high pitched, singing

YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAH

this one was a low,sinister yeeeeeah

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